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Skin spoils as the golden glow
Rusts to become pitiful brown
Masks become reliant
As all faded lights need replacement
Pathetic attempts of beauty
Create dark illusions
Concluding in heartless faces
As lies grow too dependent
The fear of reality increases too far
As others laugh, taunt and pick
Seductive fumes overcome
The sincerity of the original
True souls pushed
Into cold, dark rooms
To be hidden and forgotten.
©2008-2009 ~Bearpod91
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Author's Comments

It's been too long. And sometimes writers block is just so long that a poem needs to break it. So I wrote this out of a random moment. It feels incredibly obvious when I look at it. So much the topics from the older poems I put on DA are simplified IMO. I can't even suspect any watchers that I use to have to still be watching me from such a long time of no entries. Hopefully this makes up for the time I haven't posted anything....

And on a surprising note, I wrote this during the daytime so that's pretty unusual for me :)

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:iconbearpod91:
SHADDUPP! :P

You just can't think of anything else to say lol

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:iconsinginchic7:
Very nice poem!

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You can close your eyes from the things you don’t want to see but you can never close your heart from the things you don't want to feel:heart:
:iconbearpod91:
Thanx! :D

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:iconsinginchic7:
you're welcome!

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You can close your eyes from the things you don’t want to see but you can never close your heart from the things you don't want to feel:heart:
:iconkalihashar:
This is great! I love your metaphores, you are really good at it, I see clearly every word as well painted old and burned paper.

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It's a madhouse, a madhouse!
:iconbearpod91:
Thanks, I'm glad you liked it. And I like the image you thought of from my poem, very cool! :D

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:iconzelme:
This is great. I particularly like the first two lines. :)
:iconbearpod91:
Thanks! :D

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